Reflection

I have done about 98% of my essay. The 2% left is grammar mistakes and sentence continuity. In my revision, I added some sentence connection words and corrected some grammar mistakes but I am not sure if there is and other mistakes left. I also moved some sentences' location which made the sentence longer.  The strength I think I have is the metaphor of basement. The weaknesses are sentence continuity. Having an interesting title is difficult and writing thesis is kind of easy.